An Abyss

When I am with you-

You complete me

I am a part of you

You are the World!

                           

But sometimes

I fear 

Confusion

That creates an abyss

Between you and me

Even a little distance, I abhor!

And this happened,

A chasm went fathomless

You went away,

For no reason!

I got many hands to rob these tears,

But

None of them

Was Yours!

Still I am delving…

 Now,

I remembered

How you helped me

In crossing

All the hurdles…

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But,

I am full of tears

You flew away

With the flock

Lies in me, a mere hope!

How shall I,

Say you

Where I am!

        Completely         

Lonely

In this throng of strangers

Anticipating…

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

IISc-India-4:01pm-6th March-20"12"

A trial- Photography-cum-Poetry

Photoes:© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Got to love this.

[AJ Kristiansen]

Well done! Love the take on animals juxtaposed against human relationships and the use of the the pictures adds a special element too! Fabulous and very touching too :)

[MOON]

Poignant , lovely flow.

[Amila Jay]

A creative portrayal of words. Excellent write :))

[Katannaism]

I like the emotions portrayed here. Very straightforward and clear. Another great piece as always!

[Lively]

Very well described and pictured!

[R J Askew]

Very well executed. Male birds often are fickle. But some still do pair for life.

[Mary C]

love this. nice one

[Lily Mae]

This is amazing and so perfect..xo

[TheSweet]

This is wonderful, and very good pictures too. Bridges the gap between humans and animals. Very much wow! Bravo!