Tossing the thoughts!

Tossing the thoughts!

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


 

 























The coin flipped high…

Dazzling the curious eyes

Revolving…

Somersaulting…

And

Fell on the ground..

Twirled

With a clank…


A toe dancer!

 

He gazed-

 

If tail-

He

Had a tale!

 

And Head!

So,He

Moved ahead…

 

After all,

It’s a game!

 

He-

 

A dreamer by birth…

dreams- Aliyah!

 

A coin- a cachet for

Winning

And

Losing…

 

But

Each time, the loss

Escorted him…

 

Loss-

The only laurel wreath

of

the bankrupted mind…

 

No one lose

No one win!

 

Losers-

The valiant winners!

 

He march forth-

With a coin-

 A Head!

To be the Winner-

Of the lost game!



 

 























Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

18thFeb,2012, CES’s lab, IISc,12:30pm

India

“Hardest things on Earth, is choosing-what

That matters!”


Photo credits:

http://butterfly-theory.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/coin-flipping.jpg

http://craphound.com/images/image.axd.jpeg

http://www.gerasimon.com.au/images2/terra%20firma.JPG

© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


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amboo....(*astounded)
i promise it,i bet it!
the best conclusion,i could ever imagine for this poem.
the line,"To be the winner of the lost game" is very deep to me.
dear, it goes to my fav list.
ty for such a lovely poem.
and though a l'il late,i wish you a happy dasai n tihar!! tc

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

12 Years Ago

Timi lai pani, mero wishes cha :)



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There are those that prefer it that way and engage an entire lifetime making themselves good at it. Its quite a drive if you know what you are doing. This is useful because at some point all of us takes a gamble with what we know. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very touching poem... thanks for sharing..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Choices often feel like a toss of the coin. 50/50 on the outcome.. Well written..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flipping a coin it tells just how one's life can be nice poem enjoyed reading your work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some very nice thinking gone into this piece...
marvellous :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very powerful poem with some good logic. Must go forward and hope we are on the right road. No weakness in this amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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