Cross the Border

 

The rise

Gifted the day

The descend-

The night

A loop of nights and days

Whirled " A life!

 

The touch

Of White

The splash

Of Black

Backdrop of ‘Black and White’

Hence- An art!

 

The prosperity

Of boundless Happiness

The possession

Of fathomless Love

 Melt of Cold-bits and pieces

Enrich- The tranquility!

 

But Alas!

Aloof they stand

TODAY-

 

Wonder I-

The lashes of eyes

Closes

You feel the night

Opens

You feel the day!

 

It’s you- who FEEL!

 

Who created the border!

And who dared to cross!

The mucky edge

The line-hence-gross!

 

Let every feet grasp

The mud of emancipation!

To the land

Where

Blindfolded are-

The flying flocks

The rambling creek

The gusting breeze

The drizzling clouds

The flowering moulds!

 

Let every ears harks

The strings that tunes to Melody

Of an explicable lexis-

The claps of the thunder

The rustle of the wind

The babble of purity

The call of nature

The roar of grandiose sky!

 

It’s you- who DREW the border!

 

 

There exists

 A Life

An Art

The tranquility

Beyond the border!

 

Your inner voice

Embraces

An urge to traverse-

A will to wipe away

The filthy border!

 

Come and feel the “life”

Cross the border!

 

 

                                                     

©Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

LHH-Indian Institute of Science

                         14-11-2011

Time: 1:30 am

I FELT like-the border-separated us!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the poem. Your words took me on a good field trip. I like the way you made the poem come alive with strong statements allowing the reader to feel the desire of the writer.
"The prosperity
Of boundless Happiness
The possession
Of fathomless Love
Melt of Cold-bits and pieces
Enrich- The tranquility!"
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amila Jay]

Wow, a very entertaining piece of writing:-)

[Livana Lowell]

Dear Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini",

I enjoyed this piece. I say all the time, anything is possible. So many times, us humans create our own obstacles and wonder why we're in such a mess. One's imagination and will can take him/her to the high depths.

My favorite line...? All of them. I loved the power I received from the poem. I am inspired. Art is beautiful and for those who understand it, is escape.

Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

[Mary C]

this is a beautiful poem

[Seshat Nidaba]

Here I am getting to review a poet from Nepal, how cool is that! oh! this was innovative and happy happy lines.

I could read stuff like this forever.

[K.C. Zbryk]

You weave quite an image through this peice and pulls the reader into the imagry of this poem. I felt as if i was immersed in this piece. Amazingly well crafted and full of a determined hope. And the picture was the perfect ending to this piece. A wonderful mix of poetry and art!

[Sunflower 20]

that was really awesome! i liked the way you linked back to the words:
A life
An art
The tranquility

that was very nicely done. i also liked the use of exclamation marks, it really made the poem flow with a sense of urgency and passion which needed to be heard. very well done. thank you for sharing :)

[Rene Velez]

Uplifting and inspirational....

[Kenneth The Poet]

Intriguing write. Brings the small flicker out from within.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

incredibly inspirational!

[Lively]

Really artistic!