The Synecdoche- The 9/11

Gently …

Creeps in the life

In this “single” Earth

And sprouts
Here the thousands
of life...

One-

Then two-

Followed by the numbers

and many…

 

And the verve evolves-

Grows-

Divides…

The fragments-

Thus scattered-

All around

 

Rise of-

Billions of thoughts-

Billions of religions-

Billions of “billions”-

The agony, hence, spreads...

 

A decade hushed

And passed...

The pain remains,

Somewhere!

 

"Twins"-so- estranged!

“…division” hence

Seeks a way out!

To unite...

The thoughts-

That shall never unite!

Finally

Blasts out

 The 9/11!

 

 

-Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9/11/11  Time:1:00 am, LHH-110-IISc

Dedicated to

"All Human , All over the world"

 

 

Reviews

[Amrita Sharma Pokharel]

I have no words left ..I am lucky to get you as my sister... keep on making me feel proud of you...lots of love

And for this poem...I am no more surprised as my jaw-drops when I go through all of your poems ...9/11 is one of them...Excellent

Love
Ams :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful.

[Dayran]

A symmetry in the creative impulse as related to the events of its living experience. ' Did he smile his work to see? Did he that created the lamb, create thee?' ( Blake ). Boldly manifested in the expression of your poem. Well done!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Wow! A very gentle, pointed, and precise poem. i loved it.
"Division" hence. Critical, powerful words.
Most excellent.

[lostboy]

give peace a chance,, comes to mind . but some will not have peace they lust for war they live for death ..if we seek death we shall find it .. if we seek peace why will we not find that. ...walk softly and carry a big stick.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some great poetic points made, super apt writing!!!

[Larry Dyson]

for english as a first language speakers the word verve may not be as smooth a choice as/ like"vital energy" or some other choice..it was a bit upper crust for the rest of your poem when I read it thru the first two times...?just sayin'?