Life-as an Oxymoron

Life as-an Oxymoron

 

I, then

Those streets

Loneliness

Crowds

Lost!

I, now

This trail,

Contented,

Alone,

Smile!

I

Suffered…

Cherished…

Baffled…

Unearthed…

 

Marveled am I

 God-

A Poet

Life-

A poem

It’s

An Oxymoron!

An Irony!

Juxtaposition…

An Antithesis…

Created

Lonely Crowds

Bleeds- then heals

Me and You

Have everything-still bankrupt

The Rivalry between us…

I,

Watched

And walked away…

Emptiness,

Shouted!!!

 

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

19^th August, 2011, IISc

The Rivalry between the awful angels and the good devils within…

Me…Witnesser-I who penned…

Reviews

[Dayran]

A mixed bag of emotions. I take it, it can't be easy to manage two very diverse groups such as you have described. I miss the communication that is possible between the two sides and I miss not walking away. You are a poet kiddo.....practice makes perfect.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

As always....marvellous....evry piece u write is worth reading....:)
Great piece once again....:))

[Vinod Kumar U K]

beautiful tosing of the golden coin...........

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly researched and adiment piece, well written and a joy to read.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful. I love how you wrote about the maxim: two sides of the same coin and how you focused on the god/human aspect of it. Nice work.

[Hotwater]

Clever stuff... with class.
*bird*

[Inyourshadow]

This is wonderfully deep especially love the 4th stanza God refered to a poet and a poem, for all his works displayed every day for all to enjoy. Keep em' coming

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Such a great way to emphasize the confusion of human emotion and the picture at the end does such a fabulous job of summing it all up. Wonderful read friend all the best.

[Jibey]

So often we feel one way and so often we feel another... You set out the contrasts so effectively and with such a well-chose accompanying image...