Green- My Sky

I I am

Thursday, August 4, 2011

Green-My Sky

I argue...

What you’ve -doesn’t belong to me!

So why should “I” lie under your

Dry-Indistinct-hazy Canopy…?

Unlike yours,

Green is my sky and blue- my ground

Here bud the Stars that blossom

The swifts- the flaps "The Flail Sound

Twinkles, here the flowers

Unlike yours,

They fill in the abyss

The gentle breeze can swing

That- drops the happiness-as the oozing

“Gentle-Green-Glare” anonymity…

Unlike yours,

I can pluck the gorgeousness

And feel its fragrances

It’s the limit for some

But,

I can go swinging around…

The unruffled shed

For me

My “Sky”…

That roots in the magnificent Earth

Unbiased!

Sacred!

And Green!

I have no big promises like yours!

To climb the ladder and pull down the veil

Bring the stars!

Adorn the Laurels!

But yeah,

I am amused by

Flowers that shines!

Dews on the stars,

The fluttering fin

and

For me, my sky is always “Green”

-By Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

Under the Green Sky and the wild lilacs all

Around

4^th August,2011, Thursday- IISc

Dedicated:

To the Verdent-moss-quiet-turf …my head relaxes on!

To the detonators of nature!!!

Dedicated to IISc, India

Reviews

[Linear]

Gorgeous poetry is so rooted in the things we often take for granted, however you have managed to Stop and look around, and your expressions are quite wonderful I particulary like this line The swifts- the flaps "The Flail Sound, and I can't think why, I just do. :0)

[what-the-frick]

This is amazing and poignant and truly makes you think! I love it!

[nevermindfan1991]

Hello! I just got your friend request and read your poem. Very well written, nice structure and interesting topic. Great Job!

[.]

taking the world and turning it on it's head..thats what poetry is for!

[Emily B]

a friend once told me that he wanted to meet the person that didn't believe that grass is green, he thought he had found an argument he could always win . . . i wanted to meet that person to embrace their imagination and courage . . .

it is good to finally find you

[Hotwater]

Lovely poetry. natural green... the splendid colour. Top draw.
*bird*

[Kenneth The Poet]

I like the color change between earth and sky and how it inspired you so forcefully. Salud!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem was amazing. A wise man can see the beauty in nature. Your description took me to some good places. Thank you for your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

You've created a beautiful picture for my minds eye to absorb today... an excellent write..xxx