Diluted !!!

I , hereby , dedicate this part of my imagination to the World where everything gets diluted....

Concentrated Ambiance

Pulls You

to get diluted

with the air

that faintly cross

the hills

Ripples the Pond

and

Get mixed up with the soil

The Emotions within You

Will get diluted

when those tears

washes your eye-lashes

& topples down on the letter..

Your words

hence

diluted...

When the massive crowds

cries for You

You , Alone and

The swarm of Heads

Applauding hands

Brave , you stand

Head high

Your Fear

hence

diluted...

When You are resting your body

On the death bed

You smile

the World drops their hearts

You are

Perishable

and

Finally,

Your smile , Diluted...

World mourns !!!

and

It's the truth!!!

God has

His own ratio

To dilute

You and the Space

its

Zero is to two ratio

Where

Your Normality seldom matters

Your creed seldom matters

Your possession seldom matters...

After all,

You are meant to be

Diluted..!!!

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Time: 12:05 pm-2nd April, 2011

Saturday,

Me and My works around

Mitrapark , Kathmandu,

Nepal

Accompanied by

Pen , Diary and Laptop

and A heart-Which is diluted..!!!

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Allen Smuckler

When I first read "Diluted" I was going to say, "nay" we are not diluted...I don't want to be diluted...not me...however
as I read and re-read this classic poem...I began believing what you were telling me...and the reality of it all...is that we do dilute and wane and eventually fade away.
Dilute, if you will...A very powerful write and not only did I love it..........I felt it.
allen

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Linear

No no no, for the words we write upon the hearts of people we may never see, shall never be deleted, a smile a frown cannot drown in waters deep solution.....for you and I though far apart shall our friendship ever sprout, we will not allow this thought this writing or our words to be forever deleted............you have the mind of a poet :O}

Ashesh

wow! words spoken like a true monk. i think we need to find some meaning to this life before we Dilute. nothing can be taken (with ourselves) after we perish but lot can be left behind. the legacy of love and truth, that's what i live for. again, a outstanding poem. keep going.

[p.s- just a suggestion. please dont write anything on poem section. it gets little distracting to the reader. just an opinion, else your poem rock! as always :) ]