Diluted !!!

You and I are Perishable....All these possessions are perishable..So I dedicate this piece to Our Perish-ability

Diluted !!!

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

When I first read "Diluted" I was going to say, "nay" we are not diluted...I don't want to be diluted...not me...however
as I read and re-read this classic poem...I began believing what you were telling me...and the reality of it all...is that we do dilute and wane and eventually fade away.
Dilute, if you will...A very powerful write and not only did I love it..........I felt it.
allen

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

A time when similar of thoughts running in on mind....
Yes I got "diluted' wid your words again....:)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

From dilute to diluted at the end whole of the blue planet is diluted and dissolved in the small tiny place in the milkyway... nice poem.

[sushi]

i got diluted in the truth that your write is diluted with.... :)

i like the simple words that have been used to handle the depth of life....

its truly amazing write. mostly when the god word is brought in, it either turn religious or like cursing him. but this was cool and loved it. the picture adds a double plus, could relate it to many of the lines and get a wonderful feel. felt as if you were standing and viewing that scene, and these come running in your mind....

Thanks for diluting me to a lovely feel i had been waiting since long...

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strength and the desire of this poem.
"God has
His own ratio
To dilute
You and the Space
its
Zero is to two ratio"
So many powerful statements in this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Birdman313]

very philosophical and emotional

[Joe Shetina]

Like all of your work, philosophical, thought-provoking, emotional, and above all these, true.

[Sunflower 20]

your words are wonderful and the image you chose brought this peice to life, great job :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love this work. Very true to form.

[Jibey]

Sadwith sentiments - challenging to read... Expresses well the pity of it all..

[Dayran]

No one is indispensable - is a common saying. But I believe what you mean is that we are ' meant ' to be so minimized as the experience of a global oneness is diminished to that of an individual. It certainly speaks of the current experience in our societies, these days. If we fear such an experience, its on account of the safety we have associated with being ' big.' Where it 'gets mixed up with the soil', it enables you to discover yourself again, in a new awakening. Your poem is a pulse of the times!