An Abandoned Freedom

This work of mine is dedicated to the freedom..freedom of being myself...freedom of letting the cage open..freedom of holding the head high...freedom of flying in the sky

"He" lets "Her" free

to feel the dews 

under her bared feet

Her arms stretched up

the breeze passes by her ears

Gently,

they whispered the pristine hymns

the pure oozes 

touched her charred cheeks

And slides down her neck

She moves her hands

to touch those lilacs

the Wild flowers

the Butterflies

The Tapestries of grasses

She bounces up high 

the freed dove

She sang..

Delighted 

She can Speak !!!

She twists her body 

An Arch

She can move !!!

She yells out

"No more 

The shackled Freedom

Freedom of Gasping

Conditions

Heartless Commitments

Biased Compulsion..

Hereby, I break the Disagreed Agreements"

And,

Finally,

Discontinuing the Chains 

the Manacles of Partiality

"He"  lets "Her" free to 

Feel an Abandoned Freedom...

[ He ( The Old Orthodoxies) and Her ( The Human) ]

By Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Time: 11:10 am , Thursday, 

31st March, 2011

At my desk, Occupied Resource Center,

WWF-Nepal, Baluwatar,

Kathmandu Nepal

[ My eyes are swollen up..and my heart

feels the feel of Abandoned Freedom]

Reviews

[Linear]

Marvelous imagery, wrapped up in this poem, to break free of the constraints placed on us from our childhood, to shake off those bonds is very difficult to acchieve, but to gain our own sight, to see the world through our own understanding is worth all the pain and ridicule it may take to at last be FREE..............Excellent poetry

[Emily B]

oh, perfectly written, moved my heart . . .

[imawriter]

very interesting piece

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful way to look at life.
"No more
The shackled Freedom
Freedom of Gasping
Conditions
Heartless Commitments
Biased Compulsion..
Hereby, I break the Disagreed Agreements"
I like the feel and emotion of this poem. Made me feel better and hopeful after reading.
Last line and artwork made the poem complete. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Audrey Howitt]

Your poem is packed with emotion and energy! There is so much going on and yet, at the end, it feels light and free!

[Brad]

this was so vibrant and blazed with true freedom, the metaphor worked perfectly

[Brette Medb]

There is so much in such a short poem and that's what I liked best. You managed to fit in all the emotion, belief, and happiness all into one piece. This was very well written.


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[Ashesh]

how liberating! your poem creates prestine imagery. one can be free in absolute sense only if he submits himself to nature. awesome read. thanks for sharing :-)

[Lily Mae]

The real raw emotion of being set free from a tie that binds us to suppression is well expressed here in your poem.. It shows the freedom felt in being set free... I think you penned those emotions beautifully here.. :) xx