Between Somebody and Nobody

Between Somebody and Nobody

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

I want to dedicate this poem to Self

Mitrapark, Chabahil, Kathmandu,

Nepal,

Time: 8:00 pm,

No lights...60% charge remains...



"Between Somebody and Nobody"



Between the applauding crowds and the lonely roads...

Between the perishable happiness and the persisting sorrows...

Between the uphilling Summit and the down dust...

Between the glittering golds and the fragile rust...

Between the rewards and the demotion...

I behold the deep abyss..


Between the inspiring past and the glorious future...

Between the rosy smile and the painful tears...

Between the courage and the dreadful fear...

Between the sky and the sea...

Between You and me...

I behold the crease..


Wondering all about being Nine day wonders...

Wondering all about creating a blunder

I wonder!!!

As

It always created a "between"

A Between that never can be filled

A Between that never touches

A Between that remains in between...

Here I beheld the difference of lying

BETWEEN SOMEBODY AND NOBODY




Fantasized by-

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

© 2011 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


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Another great piece and I loved the picture at the end of it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like the crossroads

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's kind of funny but as I read the words "ying and yang" kept coming into my thoughts. Between all we want and all we don't get is that balance. Hmm you've provoked my thoughts this morning :) x Great write..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah the repetition is soothing, a stark and memorable piece, wel written, good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My first impression was that there was a lot of 'betweens'. But this is an excellent piece. Enjoyed reading this brief write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A amazing poem my writer friend. I like the emotion and the pace of the poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the concept a lot, its very intriguing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kathmandu, Nepal



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"When words are stiff and hard to evoke out; they shape themselves as a poem [that last forever] " -Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini" http://sanjeetapokharel.blogspot.in/ When I see the.. more..

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