Walking along with the Verse

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Walking along with the Verse

The Verse !!

The lashes hugs each other

and welcomes the dream

The dream

that leads to..

the world of fantasy

the gusto for life

the bond of amity

I move...

from a letter to a letter,

deep into the words,

the words of love,

the words of hatred,

the words of care,

the words so scared,

I bring them together 

create a sentence

ALAS !!!

I am lost !

I am lost !

The sentence clutches my hand

and pulls me up,

to the world of reality

and whisper the phrase

" You Can" !!!

I turned around

under the parasol of sounds

The sky roars

and then showers

The oozes of Punctuation

The metaphors that compares

The Simile that likes

The Pun that creates

Here I smile

Personifying my dream,

to the feminine stream

where she touches,

the bank and splashes the beauty...

Fizzle!!!

and disappears !

The Rampage of thoughts...

The sentence poked me..

The lashes rehash..

Bunches of letters , words and sentences..

Vanishes with the gush...

leaving behind...

Me , My Imagination and this Verse...

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Time:10:40 pm, Wednesday,

23rd March,2011...

No lights as usual...

Mitrapark,Chabahil,

Kathmandu , Nepal......

Dedicated to the verse....

Posted by Sanjeeta sharma pokharel "Hridayaninadini' at 8:57 AM

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

i like the place in the photo. Look peaceful and beautiful. The poem is very strong. We must overcome many things in a life. We must try to be kind and not offend people and the earth. I like how the language flowed in the poem. Allow me to think and feel your desires. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Judy Ponceby]

This flows so well. I like it. Thank you for sharing :)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I like this a lot my friend.

[Brad]

maybe dreams are true reality? funny how when the eyes are closed we're happy and when they're open we are sad

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so cool

[Linear]

This is truely beautiful, the words of the poem float down one by one to caress the mind of the reader so very tenderly, written by that feminine hand, and left to imagination ............:O]

[Lily Mae]

Simply beautiful and well versed thoughts:) x