Changing the trail...

Changing the trail...

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"




A floret tumbler…

Of the glass and the crystal-

One of her mighty possession-

Stood on the  shelf-

Glorious…

Her eyes on it-

Many stories to unwind-

With those winding creepers-

On it’s wall…

Its lining-

The memoirs of yesteryear…

She touched-

The feel of being cared…

She wiped-

The dust of dreary days…

And she held-

A reflection that smiled…

A proud possession…

An euphoria to relish!

Alas!

The gush of wicked wind-

Smashed it on the floor,

The scattered fragments…

She is lost-

And lost what she had-

Her possession…

Desolated…

An ambiance- so melancholy…

A floret tumbler, hence,

Ousted by the bud vase…

The lining so different-

Revamped from heaven-

She thought…

A dislodged cheer-

A supplanted feeling…

A new story to begin with-

And a new possession to feel-

Proud of...


Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Photocredits:

1.http://images.fineartamerica.com/images-medium-large/1-red-haired-girl-sitting-on-a-veranda-berthe-morisot.jpg

2.Ribot_Theodule_A_Girl_Arranging_A_Vase_Of_Flowers-1.jpg

© 2014 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
We overcome our grieves. Things, once special to us, vanishes and we learn to let it go...
This piece, a part of such thoughts...

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Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"A dislodged cheer-
A supplanted feeling…
A new story to begin with-
And a new possession to feel-
Proud of..."
I like how you led to the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your are an artist with words! You paint vivid images with your poetry and create form with your word spacing. added to my favorites, again!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"A dislodged cheer-
A supplanted feeling…
A new story to begin with-
And a new possession to feel-
Proud of..."
I like how you led to the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely expressed the feelings, I liked the end, its indeed a nice read,
Thankyou for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very pragmatic poem it is, loved the feeling it carries across.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved the way you end it...very beautifully written...and very well presented

Posted 9 Years Ago


Its no doubt hard ... but it does get better. Nice ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I understand this as a nostalgic look at loss, with a central metaphor that runs through the text. Like this, lots of good language here well expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Kathmandu, Nepal



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