You are the Universe...

You are the Universe...

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

(Yes,
For them-
Who think...
That you left me!
Sorry as well,
For I just heard you-

In the early chirrups…

You are the Universe-

Around me)

 

You follow me as the wind,

And guard me like the stars,

And chant the best of the chirps,

To heal these undying scars…

 

Your warmth, the sweetness of Sun,

And touch of grasses-your care…

You are the fireflies-

In the shadows- that I fear!

 

In the laughter of that child,

I behold your mirth,

When I miss you, this big-

I embrace this earth…

 

I know you are around me,

And watching what I do-

I may gaze occupied-

But…

Mostly, I think of you...

( This wind just whispered-

In my ears and left-

And here I park myself,

Staring at this void-

Smiling, yet...)

 

Photo credits:
http://images.fineartamerica.com/images-medium-large-5/the-universe-is-my-playground-dariusz-orszulik.jpg
http://www.book530.com/paintingpic/0820f/-Oil-painting-The-Love-Embrace.jpg

© 2014 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
Some memories fulfills your day. And you long for the one who is no more with you. The sweetness lies when you realize that they are always around you.

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Sanjeeta, Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with this community! I miss my brother so, it is such a comfort to read this! It is a beautiful write- added to my favorites

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks Mary. Only who goes through that pain can understand, how sharp it is.
Beautiful, haunting, poignant... they do become part of us and their spirit never leaves us although their physical presence has disappeared... thanks for sharing :

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

:) Thank you
It is a feeling no one can deny, an emotional work here to read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

:) Thank you
I agree. Beautiful artwork and strong words. Missed elders become part of us. They do become part of us also. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

Always await your review. Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome and always a pleasure to read your words.
A point of experience of oneness ... like an epiphany ... that finds itself related to all life. Wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

Gracias :)
A really good write... Some people might leave us, but their memories will always stay with us.. :)..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
One of the best poem from you, very well metaphorically written and it carries so much serenity and warm thoughts. Beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9 Years Ago

Gratitude :)
A remarkable poem, with metaphorical strength, a dialectical layout that is clever, that fits, Great !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Most telling of pieces, one walks through thoughts never far from the fore, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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