Sorry, it was not you!

You screamed

“Off, you go!”

When your eyes ignore

And my tears deny

This pain seems senseless…

How can I say…

I am hurt by your words?

You pacified

“Sorry…”

But when yours sorry passed-by

And I, as a lonesome beggar-

Your sorry paid no coins to me

How can I say...

Your apology healed me?

You turned-off

“Speechless!”

When these ears longed for,

Your words of care,

Blank, I stare at the sky…

How can I say…

I heard those unspoken words?

So I say,

Sorry, it was not you

Who… 

Hurt me

And healed me

And understood me!

Sorry, it was not you…

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

10:30 pm, 28-04-2013

MTR-Tamilnadu-India

Photocredit:

www.paintingsilove.com

Author's Note

Under this open sky-
A thought,
Out-of-restlessness….

Reviews

[Dalebear]

What a good creative writing well done

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Elegant and descriptive, a touching portrayl.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Very creative indeed, thanks for sharing Sanjeeta :)

[michael.c.m]

This writing speaks volumes to me. And since I can listen, I hear more than just the words here. A very powerful write.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

The thunder of words shakes the skies... the rain of tears transforms the mountains. Pain recedes, understanding and healing... each come in their seasons. A moving poem, Sanjeeta.

[Leslie Philibert]

Sanjeeta has a fine feel for dialogue, and proves it here !

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Leslie :)

[Dayran]

That would be coming to terms with your own issues. Well done.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Not own issues...saw one of my friend's scenario, so. Thanks :)

[Dayran]

So you were speaking ' for ' your friend as if you were that friend? I don't understand.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

bohot aacha lika hain memsaab,

very creatively you write, well done once again...shaaabash :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Dhanyavaad :)

[Talal Hussain]

You are such a wonderful writer Sanjeeta...mein aap ke kaam ko bahut pasand krta hn :-)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Honoured. So you are :)