Amrita

Just a word for all,
And blessed they are,
Yes…

From the untied shoelaces
To the talks of fates,
Each of my words,
A piece of your thoughts

My tears, your kerchief
My fall, your hand,
My joy, your celebration
My soul, your inspiration…

Till the stars shall twinkle
And so shall the fireflies,
Your laughter will be heard,
Your name will rise…

Days will bless you,
So shall the nights…
Present shall whirl you,
To the fame and lights…

Here shall I die,
Happily on this earth,
Beneath this sky…

Just to see you smiling…

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

On your birthday Amrita :)
The 17th March :)

Author's Note

To my sister :) with lots of love and respect

Reviews

[zainul]

This is an excellent serving of 'amrita' for Amrita.
Great write.

[Prritiy]

loved this loving creation.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

This is so sweet :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

beautiful poem.. sweet

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks buddy

[Lily Mae]

This made my eyes tear up.. I used to have that in my life with my sister...or so I thought.. so touching and beautiful..xoxo

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:)

[MattHeston]

Well done, very well written

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I hope your sister had a very good birthday. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Great - what I like here is the mixture of everyday objects ( the shoelaces, the kerchief) and deep emotions, a nice mix in a excellent poem.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Leslie :)