Amrita

Amrita

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Just a word for all,
And blessed they are,
Yes…

From the untied shoelaces
To the talks of fates,
Each of my words,
A piece of your thoughts

My tears, your kerchief
My fall, your hand,
My joy, your celebration
My soul, your inspiration…

Till the stars shall twinkle
And so shall the fireflies,
Your laughter will be heard,
Your name will rise…

Days will bless you,
So shall the nights…
Present shall whirl you,
To the fame and lights…

Here shall I die,
Happily on this earth,
Beneath this sky…

Just to see you smiling…



                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
On your birthday Amrita :)
The 17th March :)

© 2013 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
To my sister :) with lots of love and respect

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This is an excellent serving of 'amrita' for Amrita.
Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved this loving creation.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

:)
This is so sweet :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful poem.. sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks buddy
This made my eyes tear up.. I used to have that in my life with my sister...or so I thought.. so touching and beautiful..xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

:)
Well done, very well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
A beautiful poem. I hope your sister had a very good birthday. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Great - what I like here is the mixture of everyday objects ( the shoelaces, the kerchief) and deep emotions, a nice mix in a excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks Leslie :)

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