Did I just say- "Women"?

Did I just say- "Women"?

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


















I write no poems,
My folks...
A poetry can't define 
their emotions!

A word have never-ever
existed
to replace them!

And yes, you got
what I meant!


Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

On the eve of International Women's Day-2013

© 2013 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
No bulky words!
No bulky poems!
Just few thoughts
And here you are woman!

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Speechless !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I bow to your words and your shared beauty..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

:)
in truth you speak- there are emotions for which words have not yet been formed- in any language. But your non-poem and photograph together express that not yet formed word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

And here I am inspired :)
Good job on promoting self-importance and egoism.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Well :)
Beautiful photo and strong words. Thank you for the thoughts on a important topic. Woman are the base of all life.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :)
It would have helped to say something. Its been that way about them always ... communicating it makes for an improvement.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Hmm :)
I'm sure you wanted to say something heartfelt here but, for me, it was lost in translation. However, I'll assume I know what you mean and that it was well-intentioned and leave it at that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

11 Years Ago

Woman. Yes, magnificent.
 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

So no bulky words and no bulk poems! :)
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

11 Years Ago

For some things words will always be inadequate and probably unnecessary.
I don't know whether I should agree with you or not. William Wordsworth had said,"Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility."
-Lokesh



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

I agree, though, on what Wordsworth quoted. But the piece above is to show the significance with min.. read more

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"When words are stiff and hard to evoke out; they shape themselves as a poem [that last forever] " -Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini" http://sanjeetapokharel.blogspot.in/ When I see the.. more..

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