When you smile...

Dad, these distant stars,

Seems no far,

When you smile…

 

Your gentle pat,

A magic potion

Concocted this valiance in us

To face all the adversities

Of this adverse world!

 

Dad, these distant stars,

Seems no far,

When you smile…

 

We won all the battles of mind,

Of no weapon and no blood,

The armor of your words

Did not let those bullet in

Triumphant, we stood…

 

Dad, these distant stars,

Seems no far,

When you smile…

 

Just the sparkle of your brilliancy,

We…

Glimmer, here and glitter, there

To spread this euphoria,

Just to see your smile

 

Yes, these distant stars,

Seems no far,

When you smile…

   

  

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

On your birthday, baba,

MRDG, IISc, 11:20pm, 1-28-2013

Photo credits for stars: http://runningxx.deviantart.com/art/Tattoo-Stars-Floral-112755174

Author's Note

My Dad has inspired me a lot. I am impressed with his way of writing. And also inspired with my mom's writing skills.
I dedicate this poem to my dad for his birthday.

EeKaBu loves you a lot, Baba, Happy Birthday :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poem for your father. He looked like a good and happy man. A wise person appreciate the good people in their life. I hope your father saw the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Yeah, he read the poem and was happy :)

[Saumya]

this is soooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet and at the same time beautiful.......!!!!
wonderful...!!!
well done..!!!

[ganga ramesh]

This poem of yours seems as if it is a tribute to all those lovable dads....i luv my dad and so love this poem too...

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Ganga.

[ganga ramesh]

always welcome :)

[Sunflower 20]

very nice. i really enjoyed the gentle flow of this poem. well done :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:)

[Mary]

What a beautiful melodic statement of love for your father! I loved my dad, he was my best friend, you poem warms my heart!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Mary :)

[de_maruf]

fine

[Ambereen]

Beautiful .... Indeed an awesome write for your inspiration .... And your personal touch with his pic gives it a more authentic feel

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Ambereen :)

[michael.c.m]

Like this a lot. Of course, having daughters, I am a bit jaded. I do like the way this flows.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Michael.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I see that you struggled to choose just the right words but these do work.. and they have become, I think, a unique statement that is imminently assimilable. They resonate with a daughter's love. A beautiful Birthday gift for your father that honors each because you have accepted your parent's donations to your talent and woven them together; this 'togetherness' makes something special and enduring. What more could a father want for his birthday? A most excellent present! ^_^

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

I am so inspired by your review. Thanks UFO Author :)

[Sid]

Very nicely written, a fitting tribute to that pillar of support who always there for you, I'm sure he would be happy to read this...great write!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Yes, he was happy. Thanks Sid :)