...Awakening: Go fearless!

No shackles can

Chain your dreams…

Nor, can they-

Imprison the rays of sun!

Go fearless- my folk!

Author's Note

Another trial with: Sketch-o-poetry!

Reviews

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:)

[Renée]

Love the message and so we shall .. Poetess !

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) Thanks

[Renée]

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[Becca Bishop]

Great work!!! I always envy you writers who seem able to get the perfect message out there with just a few lines...I hate you guys in the best way possible :D :D :D I love this!!!!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Oh I am so inspired by the way you hate us :) :)

[de_maruf]

fine

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks :)

[Mary]

Go fearless- my folk! the last line is perfect for this poem! who are the folk? the parts of self? all who have been controlled? Wonderful write and wonderful sketch. Love it!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Mary :) You made my day :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine cameo, with great punctuation - written with care.Nice one.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Leslie :)

[Sid]

Nicely written and it takes skill to convey so much in such a short write (it's something I just can't do), great little motivational message you convey it so well...very good write!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Inspired, I am.

[DrD]

Motivational and concise, this is the type of work that is most underestimated in the world of poety. To contain a message with an economy of words demands a particular skill and you have mastered that very well.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Regards- I am inspired by your review.
Gracias :)

[Dayran]

Bringing ourselves to see what we experience is half the job.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

True said Dayran. I appreciate :)