...Awakening: Dreams!

Yeah, 

Nights shall creep in, 

my folk!

And it always does...

Whilst,

They shall dream again-

Of lights

Let you be-

Awake

to amass the aura of 

those mid-night lamps...

Reviews

[Sid]

Nice, somehow it induces an image of the star spangled sky which for some reason is visible only in my dreams, I'm not sure what you meant by mid-night lamps but it really makes my mind wander into fantasy (ah the bliss). The sketch gives more depth to the poem somehow (I wish I could sketch like that, I suck btw specially when it comes to colors)...great write! Oh and for some reason I wrote a poem called awakening some time back as well (it's completely different though), I sent you an RR, check it out!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Sid,
Mid-night lamps here reflects the hard-work...There are thousand of souls who keep on dreaming, but there are few who actually are "awake" to make their dreams come true. Midnight lamp symbolizes their dedication. I will definitely go through your poem, for its completely a circumstantial co-evidence that we share the same title [Smiles]

[Sid]

Ok, that makes it a lot deeper, so let me say this again, great write! Yup it definitely is, thanks in advance!

[Jibey]

A pleasing play on the ideas of light and dark, of night and its waking moments... capturing the pulse of the night hours!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Jibey :)

[Mary]

I like this poem very much! We can dream about light or we can absorb the midnight energy of the heavenly night lights. beautiful poem, in words and sketch

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Gracias :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I like this a lot, a quality poem full of superb imagery...fine write

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks :) Leslie, was waiting for your comments :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a stunning write, like a masterpiece of old.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) Thanks Neva :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great read that gets the old grey cells firing...
well done :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) Thank You :)

[de_maruf]

fine

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) Thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the use of the poem. Artwork and poetry can work well together. Thank you for the excellent poem and artwork.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Coyote :)

[Dayran]

A kind and timely guide to issues. So, you're getting to be the dream weaver now?

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) I would love to be a dream-weaver, make all people happy- and awakened!