...Awakening: Perishable, you are!
A Poem by
Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
You are made of-Earth,
Oh my folk-
Into this Earth,
You will dissolve...
© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
Author's Note
A picture-ized Poetry
[ When feelings are hard to explain- I sketch]
Reviews
Love the pure simplicity of the piece ! But rich in the message it carries !
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Simple but true, well spoken words of wisdom...great write!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simple but true, well spoken words of wisdom...great write!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
and so we are. Elegant in simplicity.
Posted 12 Years Ago
and so we are. Elegant in simplicity.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great write imagery to the earth we return.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Great write imagery to the earth we return.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
beautiful
Posted 12 Years Ago
beautiful
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Really, really fine poem, that speaks for itself and doesn`t need a review. Wonderful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Really, really fine poem, that speaks for itself and doesn`t need a review. Wonderful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you Leslie :)
We are all from around here Sanjeeta. We understand what you mean.
Posted 12 Years Ago
We are all from around here Sanjeeta. We understand what you mean.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Your words spoken like a true Native American would speak. The simple quote is true. We will become part of the earth in death. Our body is made of the gifts of this earth. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
Your words spoken like a true Native American would speak. The simple quote is true. We will become part of the earth in death. Our body is made of the gifts of this earth. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
You always inspire me, I am indebted :)
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Added on October 16, 2012
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Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini" Kathmandu, Nepal
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"When words are stiff and hard to evoke out; they shape themselves as a poem [that last forever] " -Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
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