Yes, I hate 'him'!"

 

‘He’ brought me,

The flowers-

Where no fragrance

Remained!

I praised ‘him’ for his efforts,

And said

“Why these papers,

Looks like

The flower-in-vain! ”

‘He’ took me to

The place-

Where no grasses

Were touched!(by the beam of light)

I admired the obscurity,

And said

“Why can’t you fetch in

That tiny Sun,

In your mighty-wallet!”

‘He’ showed me up,
to ‘his’ ceiling-
The majestic bunch light
hanging dead!
I smiled, mockingly
and said
“why don't you allow-in
the brilliance of
millions of fireflies"

For ‘his’ every labor,

I tried finding- Zilch!

For ‘he’ knew, by now-

That

Yes, I hate ‘him’!

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

25^th-July-2012-CES-IISc-12.30pm

Infected eyes-Infected thoughts-

Materialism [He] Vs. Spiritualism [I]

Posted by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

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Reviews

[Sid]

I'm not entirely sure about this poem, but somehow I get the feeling it's about shunning the materialistic nature of love and instead embracing the God given beauty. Just my thought, but it is definitely an intriguing write and well expressed. Maybe I should read the other comments in case you have explained it, but I think I'd prefer you views...very interesting write!!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Sid,
Every one is gifted with their own way of perceiving things. So you did. If I say-Red, it might be a color for some, violence for some other and a rose for few. So is my poem. I appreciate that you some how caught hold of the theme. I was frustrated viewing the World around me- what matters to them- is 'material'...They find beauty in discounts and sales. You go and smile to a stranger- he will give a damn! We have almost forgotten that we are His creation...
At the end of the poem, I have mentioned what He and I in this poem connotes...
Thank you for going through my fantasy...

[Sid]

Yeah, but you can't deny that materialistic desires are relevant in this world though I agree it can be a pain when all people think about is "material", we should take some time to look at real beauty. And your fantasy was worth dwelling into, so you are welcome!

[Mary]

strong poem- materialistic offerings cannot reside with the spiritual

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

And that's the core theme of this poem :) Thank you

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

And everything gives the meaning...Materialism [He] Vs. Spiritualism [I]....
Lovely Sanjeeta..:)