My Love...

Another poetry on love...

Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...

 

Listen to my voice, 
the song I'm about to sing.
It's incomplete without you,
sounds magical on my six strings...
My voice will shake your heart,
you'll feel the Cupid's sting.
you'll fall for me my dear,
and will fly without any wings...

 

Just look at me,
try to listen to my song.
You'll be spellbound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear, my dear,
there's nothing wrong.
We'll be together forever,
in the romance, lifelong...

Author's Note

Kindly review it...
Special thanks to Dale for helping me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Blue]

"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)

[Blue]

You are welcome!

[Fatimah]

"And will fly with out any wings" - My favorite line from your poem. You've done a fantastic job.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Daisy]

wonderful poem.. well done

[Sanjh]

Thanks Daisy...:)

[Lizardo]

This is awesome, I do love a lot this poem. The descriptions in it and everything about it is really good
Great work!

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating...:)

[Lizardo]

You are welcome!

[ayejodie]

This sounds so hypnotising, like a love spell! 😊 enjoyed it!

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you Jodie...:)

[Saddam]

Too romantic with the twist of sadness. But a very beautiful piece.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poem for love. I like the want and the need of the words. Love make us strong and unafraid. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Coyote...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[blackfairy3]

Wow you have such an amazing talent keep writing u r awesom

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Moonlight]

It is an amazing poem but it feels more like a song! Super romantic and cheesy! This composition of yours is overflowing with "love". Overall it is well connected between the stanzas and it delivers the emotion of happiness and love quite sweetly. :)
Nice work! Keep writing.

[Sanjh]

Thank you Shivangi. It's not a song, not yet. But I'm going to make some changes in it and will add a chorus to make it a song, I'm working on it...:)

[Moonlight]

good luck with that! :)

[Sindu]

So gooey Sanjh! :D (jk) Sweet and hopeful.. another happy write from you..
Amazing.. made me smile (:

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Sindu, keep smiling...:)

[Grace Shaw]

I love romantic poems! This one is fantastic! It definitely shows that it came from your heart.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Grace, I'm glad you liked it...:)