Moonlight...

A feeling long suppressed...

Sitting at the window,
I saw the full moon tonight.
It felt beautiful than ever,
Showering bright white light...

There was some sadness in it,
It felt like the moon is crying.
I think the moon was talking to me,
But why was he shying...?

The moonlight touched my face,
Reminding me of someone very special.
A tear rolled out of my eyes,
And head went to nestle...

All the emotions suppressed,
Came out through my eyes.
Just looking at the moon,
My tears went on rise...

Maybe she too was looking at the moon,
Maybe she was also crying.
My heart was pounding so fast,
I felt like I'm dying...

All the times when we were together,
Kept on flashing in my mind.
My heart filled with her love,
And now it was not confined...

The moonlight told me,
How much she misses me.
There are tears in her eyes,
And she is making this plea...

"Please come back to me,
Let's try to work things out..."
My mind was confused,
But the heart wanted to shout...

I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight...

Author's Note

Got the idea for this poem while returning late at night from work. Hope you'd enjoy...thank you...:)

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
I have felt this feeling before as if my special someone and I were longing
for one another under the same moon at the same time:(
I really enjoyed this piece and pray that you and yours work things out!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much James. :)

[Natalie]

I really liked this one! The moon indeed always makes me think of someone special, and it makes me think whether they were thinking about me too, since we share the same moon.

[Sanjh]

True, Natalie. Moon always play a role of medium when we are missing someone. Thank you for reading...:)

[LadyNaida]

The moonlight can bring a romantic atmosphere especially when two people are in love. Romantic evening walks under the moonlight, aw.

[Sanjh]

So true, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you...:)

[Ana B.]

Beautiful ending. Amazing poem....i've always had a thing for the full moon.....

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Ana...:)

[Moonlight]

I love the moon. I find it be really beautiful in the night sky. I have always associated moon and moonlight to loneliness, sadness, monotony and beauty. Your poem really did bring out these. It was a beautiful piece with the right feel.

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you so much Shivangi...:)

[AYVID N]

This is a wonderful poem on the beauty of a moonlit night and the mental telepathy shared by true lovers. I am amazed at the sheer amount of feelings you managed to pack into a page. Thanks for sharing the poem. Just loved it.

[Sanjh]

thank you so much Divya, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Sanjh. Keep writing and sharing! :)

[Cool Girl]

Wow! I really did enjoy this poem. Thanks for sharing:)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!

[Layi Tate]

Oooooooooo I love this it's beautiful....

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Layi...:)

[Layi Tate]

Thank you for the read request ... I hope to see more from you . :')

[rashu]

how nicely you penned down your views...
the way you described the scenerio ..i could really feel it happening around..
the pain of seperation from someone you loved in past ,the coonfusion to go back or continue with life
very well described

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Rashu...:)

[Misha]

Lovely poem and i really enjoy it

[Sanjh]

Thak you Misha, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Misha]

Ur Welcome

[Elowen]

Great poem! The imagery is beautiful and very well-written.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Elowen...:)