A Princess Story...

Re-publishing it with some changes.

There was a princess,
in a land full of magic.
Her beauty second to none,
and her thoughts so romantic...

 

Searching for her soul mate,
across the countries, across the lands.
She had many adventures,
From the mountains to the sands...

 

After searching so far,
she found her prince charming.
Fierce as a warrior,
and face always smiling...

 

The prince was perfect for her,
their love grew strong.
But as this is a fantasy,
something has to go wrong...

 

The princess was abducted,
"as always", by an evil witch.
Her dungeon between the mountains,
near the fearsome ditch...

 

The prince with his army,
went to rescue his beloved.
But only the prince could reach,
as his army was magically flooded...

 

The prince fought bravely,
but was no match for the witch.
And princess was crying, watching
the witch push him down the steep pitch...

 

The prince held on tight,
Waiting for a miracle.
Watching him struggling,
princess broke all her shackles...

 

She picked up the sword
driving it through the witch's heart.
and saved her prince,
giving his life a fresh start...

 

This story went a bit weird.
But all I wanted to say
is it's not the prince,
who always saves the day...

Author's Note

Trying my hands on fantsy for the first time. Hope you'd like it...:)

Reviews

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

Prince don't always make the effort. Sometimes both sides need to work on it to make things work, being dependent never been the solution to certain problems. Make it be true to life or fantasy, it always have to be fair.

This one's great, for a person who is used to cliches this one is new but then again I also love twists on plots. This don't look like one for a first timer.

[Sanjh]

Well said Shitsune, it's true that for a successful relationship the efforts must be made from both the ends...
thank you for reading...:)

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

You're welcome again :)

[L.E.Osborne]

I rather like the way you rhyme and I just love how it ends.

'It's not the prince who always saves the day' and that couldn't be more true! Well done :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[L.E.Osborne]

No Problem :)

[Laura Lynn]

This is or would be a nice narrative to illustrate. I would like that! Classic and with enough emptiness to make it worthwhile for the illustrator's imagination to create, to build upon, to add to

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much for reading...::)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you have done well..........

"After searching so far,
she found his prince charming.
Fierce as a warrior,
and face always smiling...



The prince was perfect for her,
their love grew strong.
But as this is a fantasy,
something has to go wrong..."

why should anything go wrong in a fantasy???

it started well..................it ended very well......!!!
nice work!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Sanjh]

Lol, don't know bro, it's just that there is always a villain in the story...:p
thanks for reading...:)