Thunderous night...

A small story...

I was furious,
had a great fight.
she was yelling,
it was a thunderous night...
I took out my bike,
accelerated with all my might,
Moving with the wind,
I felt like a kite...

The wind was strong,
flying dust blocked my sight.
Rushing into the dark,
I felt like a knight...
But I couldn't see anything,
no source of light.
Maybe I hit something,
and my ride took a flight...

I tried to not to die,
I tried to hold on tight.
But it was too late,
I was falling down the height...
Crashed to the bottom,
"My life will end tonight."
Lying down in pain,
I saw the divine light...

Next thing I remember,
I woke up on my bed,
she was standing there,
her face looked so bright...
It was just a dream,
reminding me of what's right.
I kissed her dear lips,
whispering  a good night...

Author's Note

I'd love to hear your views, help me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Penny]

Sometimes, it is necessary to think of the worst case scenario.. the feeling of losing everything because after you've felt the horror and seen it and very next moment you find your loved one with you, you cherish his company more. You love your life more. Well done..

[Sanjh]

Life always reminds us of the things that are truely dear to us in one way or other, we just need to follow our heart. Thank you for appreciating...:)

[Penny]

My pleasure completely.

[Daniel Navarro]

I really loved this! It flowed great and it definitely took me on an emotional ride. the ending was heart warming and just overall I thought it was wonderful. Nice job!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[R Smith]

it was superb Sanjh, well written and rhymed, sad and happy at the end, lovely stuff :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you Sir, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Confuser]

Oh, I loved it! I went on that ride too and it was wonderful! Everything flowed so beautifully. Wow, what a fantastic poem. thank you so much. I wish I could write like that. Smiling.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much once again. Your reviews always makes me smile. :)

[Confuser]

I'm glad. I like your writing or I certainly wouldn't say so.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Confuser]

.....................................Yep

[M.A.Rathore]

Wonderful expression of dream in the diction full of rhythem anfd flow of language that it leads to the soothing impact at the end when you are hugged and kissed..
Really I enjoy it very much..
Keep writing lovely stroies.
Have a nice time!

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome . Do review some of my poems..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Sweet!!!
lovely poem.....
nice rhythm....
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. maybe replace the "my ride" by an "on" 3rd verse 2nd line........a few more ignorable errors. well, ignore!

[Sanjh]

Thank you, helpful suggestion...I'll update it...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.............:)

[Gurleen Saluja]

portrays a great imagery. good work by you, sanjh. loved reading it :)

[Sanjh]

thank you so much...:)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome