Thunderous night...

A small story...

I was furious,
had a great fight.
she was yelling,
it was a thunderous night...
I took out my bike,
accelerated with all my might,
Moving with the wind,
I felt like a kite...

The wind was strong,
flying dust blocked my sight.
Rushing into the dark,
I felt like a knight...
But I couldn't see anything,
no source of light.
Maybe I hit something,
and my ride took a flight...

I tried to not to die,
I tried to hold on tight.
But it was too late,
I was falling down the height...
Crashed to the bottom,
"My life will end tonight."
Lying down in pain,
I saw the divine light...

Next thing I remember,
I woke up on my bed,
she was standing there,
her face looked so bright...
It was just a dream,
reminding me of what's right.
I kissed her dear lips,
whispering  a good night...

Author's Note

I'd love to hear your views, help me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Penny]

Sometimes, it is necessary to think of the worst case scenario.. the feeling of losing everything because after you've felt the horror and seen it and very next moment you find your loved one with you, you cherish his company more. You love your life more. Well done..

[Sanjh]

Life always reminds us of the things that are truely dear to us in one way or other, we just need to follow our heart. Thank you for appreciating...:)

[Penny]

My pleasure completely.

[TL Boehm]

dreams like this are powerful inspirations for poetry that's for sure.

[Lyndy]

I love this poem. It's so beautifully written! :)

[Misha]

I liked it....nightmares are often the window to our insecurities and fear

[Sanjh]

Thank you Misha...:)

[Luna Zerimar]

Hm, I liked this, but...it seems as if you tried to hard.

There's some lines that seem a bit corny. Child-like even.

I don't know. Please don't hate me!

Just some opinionated criticism. (:

[Sanjh]

Lol, I 'm not gonna hate you. Thank you for the honest opinion, I'll try my best to improve...:)

[Khyati]

one correction... I tried to not to die, is not right it should be i tried not to die...
Otherwise, I fell in love with this poem. I really did!

[Sanjh]

hmmmm...correct. Thank you for the correction...:)

[wesleygirl]

Can only say 3 words, I loved it!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Eleanor]

Ah the way you twisted it was great!
I liked the ending. The flow is great and the poem is wonderful!
Nice job on this! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Tara Togoland]

At first I kept on thinking "this is so unfortunate", followed it like it was an horror movie and when I read to the last lines.........phew! it was just a dream! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you Tara, it was just a dream...:)