I can feel so much disappointment and sadness in this piece, very well put together. I would say to this person in the poem to chin up, cheer up, the world is yours too take, never regret because you are still alive, and if you are alive you can still change your situation
This poem is a regret over the desired task not to be performed in time. So the writer feels helpless and weeps for it. Though it is a simple piece written in smallest words.. I like the beauty of lines .
Keep it up..
yeah, still working on it, it's bugging me too (second last verse)...
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10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
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I can feel so much disappointment and sadness in this piece, very well put together. I would say to this person in the poem to chin up, cheer up, the world is yours too take, never regret because you are still alive, and if you are alive you can still change your situation
So I'm back after a small gap of 5 months. I have more than 1200 RRs, sorry I won't be able to read them all, only the latest. Thank you for reading and reviewing my writings. :)
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