1000 ways to die...

For those who feel. Written last year...

This is my life
and am into you,
It feels so perfect,
when I walk with you.

You know it's true,
you know it's pure.
But it's the pain,
We have to share.

Don't you ever leave me,
don't walk away.
Coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways.
Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways...

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you.

you are my dream,
you are my god.
you are my everything,
That I ever asked.

But don't you ever forget me,
don't leave me alone.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.
let me be your lover,
let me be the one.
or I'll die,
In a thousand ways

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You're all I have,
You're all I need.
Don't let me die,
On my knees I plea.
even if I loose,
even if I die.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Moonlight]

It is a piece that explores through the depths of the feeling "love". It really is amazing... the way you have weaved these words in a beautiful expression of love felt from the bottom of the heart. Pure, Beautiful and above all Unconditional. I loved it a lot! The part :
"Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways... "

and,

"You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you. "

I really liked these lines. Great work! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Shivangi. :)

[Moonlight]

You are most welcome Sanjh. :)

[Jen]

This love poem, in a way is a bit self-reflecting. liked the way words are put in a pattern of a song...
the final lines plead for the beloved's return.
impressive lines:-
Don't you ever leave me,
don't walk away.
Coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways.
Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways...

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating...:)

[Jen]

welcome (y)

[Tara Togoland]

.....a thousand ways to die...... love will always be the first thing to kill mortal men. Well written.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Tara Togoland]

.....a thousand way to die...... love will always be the first thing to kill mortal men. Well written.

[Gurleen Saluja]

beautiful! a nice to read note. Thanks for sharing :)

[Sanjh]

thanks for reading...:)

[Gurleen Saluja]

you are welcome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"
You're all I have,
You're all I need.
Don't let me die,
On my knees I plea.
even if I loose,
even if I die.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways."

these are beautiful!!
loved it.....keep it up!
:)

[Sanjh]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome............:) :)

[Aparna]

omg! I loved this one ! I agree with Shitsune, if made to a song, people will go crazy over this one :) I even tried putting a tune and singing along! Great work :D

[Sanjh]

thanks... The tune is ready, I'm just waiting for the music. Maybe someday we'll hear it with music...
thanks for appreciating...:)

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

I like this, I do a lot. Seems like a good song, sure will be a hit.

[Sanjh]

Lol, may be someday I'll be a top singer/lyricist...:p

thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

This is really impressive piece of writting about the thousand ways to die. But there are ten thousand way to live my friend. Do not feel less in love. Love has the to preseave as well as to destroy the doers..
I like your last lines very much.as follows

You're all I have,
You're all I need.
Don't let me die,
On my knees I plea.
even if I loose,
even if I die.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.

Yes keep writing
Have a nice time.
Live and let live......
Do not dying before death.
For this beware of love...

[Sanjh]

Thanks for reading and appreciating...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always...