1000 ways to die...

For those who feel. Written last year...

This is my life
and am into you,
It feels so perfect,
when I walk with you.

You know it's true,
you know it's pure.
But it's the pain,
We have to share.

Don't you ever leave me,
don't walk away.
Coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways.
Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways...

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you.

you are my dream,
you are my god.
you are my everything,
That I ever asked.

But don't you ever forget me,
don't leave me alone.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.
let me be your lover,
let me be the one.
or I'll die,
In a thousand ways

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You're all I have,
You're all I need.
Don't let me die,
On my knees I plea.
even if I loose,
even if I die.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Moonlight]

It is a piece that explores through the depths of the feeling "love". It really is amazing... the way you have weaved these words in a beautiful expression of love felt from the bottom of the heart. Pure, Beautiful and above all Unconditional. I loved it a lot! The part :
"Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways... "

and,

"You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you. "

I really liked these lines. Great work! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Shivangi. :)

[Moonlight]

You are most welcome Sanjh. :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It also comes to me as a song, the repetition of sentences, words ...it emphasizes things and it's obvious here that you're begging in this poem to be her lover. Nice. :)

Rudi

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Rudi...:)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

it has lots of emotions pored in it but the line 'you are my god. ' is a little offensive. Other than that It's wonderful and more like the lyrics of a sad song :)

[Sanjh]

Yeah, that line bugs me too every time I read it, working on it...
thank you...:)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

my pleasure :)

[Sindu]

Sanjh, almost everything you write has feeling deep written in it. This is an amazing lyric. Can't help but read it to a tune. :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you Sindu, and the tune is also ready, just waiting for the day when I'll be able to play it on guitar...:)

[Sindu]

Why wait??

[Sanjh]

I'm still learning how to play a guitar, just a beginner. I have many other lyrics too, just waiting for music only.

[Sindu]

Oh learn fast then :) I really want to learn but somehow that never happens.

[Sanjh]

same thing is happening with me, I don't get much time after office and everything...:(

[Sindu]

I have a very old guitar. I think to get it repaired and learn but... :/

[Sanjh]

So hurry and get it repaired. Life's running too fast...:(

[Sindu]

Ya someone put it on fast forward without my notice ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of repetition. You made your point. I like the thoughts on the thousand way to die and live. Nice flow of thoughts led to the very good closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Coyote...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hardeep sabharwal]

A good lyric, though I can not relate with the theme of dying a thousands way

[Surya pradha]

like the idea around the poem. a very simple yet poem yet one that i find very enjoyable. keep going, sanjh!

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it brother. Thank you...:)

[Eleanor]

Its sounds like a song :D
It really has a great flow. I even tried singing this xD
This shows how much you need that person. It shows how much you yearn to be loved!
Great job!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, I too sing it all the time...:)

[ayesha gupta]

seems good, but we should respect if the other partner doesnt feels the love. dying in 1000ways shows weakness to except the truth or more like emotional blackmail. lol.
sorry, i bet i misunderstood the feel with which you wrote this completely.

[Sanjh]

Yeah, you are right Ayesha. But this song is written on a very big background story and according to that, this song serves the purpose. I'll write the story too someday...
Thank you so much for reading...:)

[R Smith]

this is why i admire you Sanjh, this write is a lyric, try as i may i can't write a lyric, your writes that come across this way are always great :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Sir, I am honored. :)

[R Smith]

its a pleasure :)

[MomzillaNC]

Nice love song… every one of those thousand ways to die might also be a thousand reasons to live. Live to be the lover… live to care… live to dry those tears… live to remember… live to love.

[Sanjh]

You are right, we always have more reasons to live than to die, but still we ignore them and let the bad memories affect our present and future.

Thank you for reading...:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.