1000 ways to die...

For those who feel. Written last year...

This is my life
and am into you,
It feels so perfect,
when I walk with you.

You know it's true,
you know it's pure.
But it's the pain,
We have to share.

Don't you ever leave me,
don't walk away.
Coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways.
Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways...

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you.

you are my dream,
you are my god.
you are my everything,
That I ever asked.

But don't you ever forget me,
don't leave me alone.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.
let me be your lover,
let me be the one.
or I'll die,
In a thousand ways

A thousand ways,
a thousand ways.
coz I'll die,
in a thousand ways.

You're all I have,
You're all I need.
Don't let me die,
On my knees I plea.
even if I loose,
even if I die.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.
my love will live,
in a thousand ways.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Moonlight]

It is a piece that explores through the depths of the feeling "love". It really is amazing... the way you have weaved these words in a beautiful expression of love felt from the bottom of the heart. Pure, Beautiful and above all Unconditional. I loved it a lot! The part :
"Give me all your misery,
can't see you cry.
coz I'll die,
In a thousand ways... "

and,

"You know I care,
You know I do.
And can't make it far,
If not with you. "

I really liked these lines. Great work! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Shivangi. :)

[Moonlight]

You are most welcome Sanjh. :)

[Ankita]

The repetition of the words "I'll die in a thousand ways" keeps the intensity of the poem up..
But it's all a pleading piece. I guess it was meant to be this way.
so keep up :)

[Sanjh]

thank you so much Ankitas. :)

[Lyndy]

I love this poem! It's well written. A job well done! :)

[Sanjh]

Thanks Lyndy, once more. :):D

[Confuser]

This is a lovely poem that anyone can relate to and I really love it. You always pour your heart out and that's so nice. I'll die a thousand time....very nice. So heartfelt - and beautiful. Thank you.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Dale, your reviews are always nice...:)

[Confuser]

Sanjh, all true. Please keep writing. You are such a nice young man with great talent.

[Prakruti]

Seems you are so much in love! Beautiful write! I enjoyed reading :)

[Sanjh]

hahaha, am not sure about it Prakruti. Thanks for appreciating...:)

[Khyati]

beautiful, pure love :'( so, you remind me of love again! ;P

[Sanjh]

Hehehe, a reminder is always useful na...:p

[Khyati]

:P not ALWAYS... ;) anyway! Nicely written :)

[Misha]

I like the flow of this poem, from the effort of making the beloved realize the importance in life to the reasoning why the survival alone will not be possible to the final attempt which anyone will do to survive in life and in love.

[Sanjh]

Thank you Misha...:)

[Misha]

Ur welcome

[Laura Lynn]

This is sweet this love to be cherished for all time, especially if it is you wife or love of your young life. Even if it is not, we still appreciate it and want to be loved like this. Though you die in a thousand ways in fiction do not in real life time. To die in a thousand ways in the story is the secret of it I gather and I will read for that from now on when those characters I am looking at die. This poem is intimate, very much so, I would like to say

[Sanjh]

you are right Laura, it is an intimate piece...
thank you so much ...:)

[stars are far]

that was like a song, and i can relate to this very directly, though it reflcts what you feel, but lots can relate, well done :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Suhad...:)

[Arshia]

I loved the lyrical attribute of this poem..perfectly expressed emotions. Great work Sanjh! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Arshia...:)