Lie Fed Rose

Lie Fed Rose

A Poem by Sanity
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Just me venting through poetry

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Stitches sewn 

are freshly ripped 

If only I had known 

If only I had been equipped

to stomach every lie 

Before this my last goodbye

As a flower begins to grow, 

So does it die

© 2012 Sanity


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Great work, the ending verse really got to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"As a flower begins to grow, so does it die" Excellent! The word play of that was excellent, simply put but fun to read. The picture fits perfect.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sanity

12 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

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Added on November 27, 2012
Last Updated on November 27, 2012
Tags: flower, lies, relationships, dating, cheating, rose, fed, stitches, ripped, Sanity, Fallen, SanityFallen, poem, poetry, romantic

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Sanity
Sanity

Petaluma, CA



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I'm a poet, I mostly write in the free verse or slam poetry genres. Every so often I will write a lyrical poem and if I do so, I will provide a link to me singing it. I have won several competitions f.. more..

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