My Hive

Some bees sting but some give us honey

Always about six, seven, eight, and nine,
Coz the rest were busy in pain.
The bees in six were to fix...
Had solutions for all my queries.
Lend their ears to all my fears.
Me in seven,
With a mate made in heaven
Rest were always a squad...
Two in eight,
Had their fate.
Another was the best pal ever
Others made into the squad forever
Nine housed my buddy,
Remaining had no time for own muddles.
This was my life in heaven like hive
With all the busy bumble bees by my side.

Reviews

[AcasualPawn]

That was Imaginative and creative.....
Rhythm and rhymes are good.. And perfectly depicting buzzzzzzzzzzzzzing bees in thre surrounding....

Keep writig Ayshwarya