Vapor

And so you disappear again,

Like a vapor in the wind

You broke my heart another time

When it was finally on the mend.

Why did you come to me

With tears in your eyes

Tell me that you love me

And fill my heart with lies?

Why did you hold me close

In love’s tender embrace

And wipe away the worry

And tears from my face?

You said we had a future

And promised much that night

And then you took it all away

My hopes, my dreams, my life.

I just don’t understand

How you could say the things you did

I threw my heart at your mercy

You stood and make your bid.

Now everything is gone….

The love, the hope, the truth

Sweetheart, you don’t deserve me

And I don’t deserve what’s become of you.

I wish you love on your journey

And you know, I wish you well…

May God’s gentle wings lift you up

So you never go through this hell.

Reviews

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what a women you are to have gone through that night with hope
just to be ripped apart with lies and STILL! wish him all of loves graces
for his future!!

Now!! you are the true definition of a women, one that
he let go........... sad for him, but lucky for you that you
found out now! rather than later...

[Chemistry]

My favorite line is "When it was finally on the mend." Your heart was stronger and able to go throught this too and like the title "Vapor" may his memory disapear forever. The warrior princess slays yet another dragon.

[DeAn]

if you can't say it, I will.

I hope his lil butt gets poked by more then just pitch forks down there. :)

You my friend, wear your pain well and your heart is safe, I can tell from here. That must be what I love the most about you, your real and don't mind that your charector appears unreal or forced at times to the fake a*s people living in a world gone crazy. We all need to learn to forgive and forget, but most forget to forgive.

me, I just don't care any more about the world and it's all for me attitude. just a few selected people. ;)

This is a great write my friend. a great right indeed.

love ya!

l8r g8r
-DeAn

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn girl this is really heartbreaking but beautifully written...

Sweetheart, you don't deserve me
And I don't deserve what's become of you.

how true this is cause they certainly not who they seem...
to many treat love like fast food... and you belong in a five star restaurant.

[Butterflymom]

Beautiful! This is a very well done piece.

[just is]

Sweetheart, you don't deserve me
And I don't deserve what's become of you.

This is truthful, and my freind you deserve respect and and someone who treats you special.
This is well expressed feelings here.