GET OUT!!

Get out of my face,

get out of my life

I'm not your woman,

no longer your wife!

 

Get out of my heart

get out of my bed

No longer controlling

you're out of my head.

 

Get out of my room

get out of my car

Don't need you around

cause I've come so far.

 

Get out of my thoughts

get out of my dreams

a life without you

will be all that I need.

 

GET OUT!!

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

WOW!!! and a definite ouch too, hard hitting and very much to the point, a brilliant show of strength and resolve too!

loved the flow and the word choice, nothing Fancy just plain good old English,

Blessed be,
Fallon

[closed account]

very very powerful!! as I read it I found my eyebrows curl down, so much emotion behind it! I am so happy you are writing to be freeeee!!

Great Job..

[kbob]

Whoever this was for probably has a big bruise across his cheek. If he doesn't, give him one for me!!!

good write!

[darkgurl]

WOW!!! So dang wonderful and powerful, I like this a most awesome write thanks for your review again....Kim

[PasDeChat]

Wow.... I could write that at times.. other times I just hide in the corner waiting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn you go girl... love the flow and rhyme not to mention the in your face no holds bar emotional punch you deliver... sometimes that what it takes... you rock!!