If I Could....

Longing for Him

If I could...

I would hold you so tightly that even God could not take you away from me.

 

If I could....

I would wipe every fear from your heart and mind so that you never wondered a moment of your life how much I love you

 

If I could....

I would buy you that hotrod car you've wanted since you were a boy just so I could see the light dancing in your eyes

 

If I could....

I would wipe away any pain I've ever caused you so that I would never again see desperation in your eyes

 

If I could....

I would come to you every night that you are lonely and need my touch and I would be there like a prayer to help you through

 

If I could....

I would change the present so that our past would be a distant memory and our tomorrows would be all that we dream of

 

If I could...

I would love you madly so that you never for one second doubted my heart's true intent

 

If I could....

I would kiss your face and touch your body so that my fingers left my indelible mark on your soul and you could never turn back

 

If I could...

I would have your child so that everyday I could look at them and know you were with me, no matter where I was

 

If I could....

I would tell you what my words cannot seem to express in enough depth -that you are my all, my strength, my life, my breath

 

If I could...

I would.

Reviews

[Mystery Girl]

i really enjoyed reading this. thanx for posting it!

[Wondering Mind]

Well penned expression of love. The last statement "If I could...I would." is a powerful ending; a return to reality.

[Isolophobe]

I'm really f*****g touched by this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Amazing show of devotion and love

If I could....
I would kiss your face and touch your body so that my fingers left my indelible mark on your soul and you could never turn back

Now that is so powerful... Incredible write.

[DeAn]

the only thing we could change, is our minds.

If I could, I'd forget.


but that is impossible isn't it.

very good write.

-DeAn

[Helen Woodward]

Beauty on the page!!! Wonderful prose, the repetitious 'If I could' sat very well with me. I know this feeling, I am more than a little familiar with it....If we only could...
Thank you for leaving your feelings on these pages for others to muse on.
Buckets of Kudos from me...
Helen :-)

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only if we could turn back time, knowing what we know now
What all would we change

[closed account]

Beautiful....

[Rhine Wolf]

What is there to say to a writer who has penned such a heart rendering piece, Well done, this is absolutely BRILLIANT. thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of art with us.

Blessed be!
Fallon

[~amanda~]

If I could....
I would change the present so that our past would be a distant memory and our tomorrows would be all that we dream of

this line almost made me cry. great piece and truly great to read. thank you for sharing!