She Came Thru

She Came Thru

A Poem by Sandy Beach
"

Someone you can count on

"

She Came Thru


when I needed cheering up

she came thru


when I was left with an empty cup

she came thru


when the sun refused to shine

she came thru


I never claimed her to be mine

she wouldn't want me too


if I was down on my luck

she came thru


when I felt completely stuck

she came thru


when I felt wilted on the vine

she came thru


I never claimed her to be mine

she wouldn't want me too


Sandy@Beach

© 2012 Sandy Beach


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I really enjoyed teh imagery in this write, nicely written

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well written with a nice flow!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love your closure. This is well written with an addictive flow. Way to go. Write on.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful creation it is smooth and brightly colored. Wheeling words truly is a gift.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the repetition in this. I liked the flow. You have a good friend. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Sandy Beach
Sandy Beach

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Hi. I am new and yes this is my real name. Actually my name is Sanford, which tells you why I go by Sandy. My parents grew up during the early hippy era , were musicians and artists, and obviously had.. more..

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