If i am not wrong then this is your best writing that i have read so far...in this short poem there is a deep theme actually this poem is really wonderful a poem that provokes its reader to think .....and actually that is the symbol of a good writer whose aim is not only to write a poem that will entertain others that others will like but a poem that has a strong message inside it , a poem that is meant to educate others , a poem that has the capability to speak out against all this social evils , which eat our society like temites eat wood and make it hollow from inside....
Proud to write review for such a wonderful poem and that is of such a fantastic writer.....
keep on writing and thanks for sharing....
Riddhi
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank You so much, Riddhi. This also shows that thought I had been away for so long you haven't forg.. read moreThank You so much, Riddhi. This also shows that thought I had been away for so long you haven't forgotten me. Thank you!
6 Years Ago
I missed you Sandra...And I will never forget you..
If i am not wrong then this is your best writing that i have read so far...in this short poem there is a deep theme actually this poem is really wonderful a poem that provokes its reader to think .....and actually that is the symbol of a good writer whose aim is not only to write a poem that will entertain others that others will like but a poem that has a strong message inside it , a poem that is meant to educate others , a poem that has the capability to speak out against all this social evils , which eat our society like temites eat wood and make it hollow from inside....
Proud to write review for such a wonderful poem and that is of such a fantastic writer.....
keep on writing and thanks for sharing....
Riddhi
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank You so much, Riddhi. This also shows that thought I had been away for so long you haven't forg.. read moreThank You so much, Riddhi. This also shows that thought I had been away for so long you haven't forgotten me. Thank you!
6 Years Ago
I missed you Sandra...And I will never forget you..
first of all it has many hidden scenario and question..if a lie has told to save a thing which is worth for you or to protect someone else, then it must be greatly awarded.. we should never allow a liar in our circle but must not avoid a lie which has more worth than a fair truth..we must always follow the beat of our heart which comes at first without considering the criticism of the world around us..
a very mature write from where many thing are to be learned!!!
Thank you so much, Mou didi. Your words have always been kept close to my heart.
7 Years Ago
it's so nice Sandra :)
and how are you? there is a long since we don't talk..
7 Years Ago
I'm doing really well, didi. And what about you? My tenth board exams falls on next month. That's wh.. read moreI'm doing really well, didi. And what about you? My tenth board exams falls on next month. That's what keeps me busy these days.
"Oh,Sandra! Is there such a child in the class?
This was the reaction of any of my classmates,if you happened to ask them about me. And now they know me, but that's the end. They know me,but not mo.. more..