Together

Being Together

 

Here we are  together,

 our goal is to make this last until the end.

To hold onto love and hope.

We will fight together to stay

strong and never let,

what could be;

go astray.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Brilliant in your ability to create the lasting depth of love and devotion in such a vivid picture! Love is beautiful and it is also something we must fight for, as you say. I so hope you've found this, precious poet and friend.

[Tate Morgan]

A great ideal to strive for .Remember life is the same at all ages and the things that bring utogether as partners dont change as you marry So it is always good to remember to be the person that each sees

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So sweet. IT perfectly describes Love and how it is. Beautiful and I love that its so short some people can get way carried away. You did wonderfully!

[Lalli]

short n sweet... i'd almost call this an oath, or a vow of some sort. The vow of never giving up and always water the seed of love to grow.

sandra great write bella..

much love n respect

-Lalli

[Tara Jean Olson]

sandra, i love the message that this conveys:
like every poem, it can always be played around with
so i think that you should take a look back on this before you call it finalized.
its romantic, thats for sure

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your short but succinct statement, sums up that solemn promise and pledge undertaken by two.

Excellent! Note; in line two did you mean 'stay' instead of 'say'.

God's Blessing
Phillozofee