Love's Ascent

Love's Ascent

A Poem by Sandi Alford

 

Clandestine afternoon was spent
beside the jagged rocks, entranced
by love’s awakening ascent.

With senses heightened and enhanced
inside the refuge of your arms--
my heart aflutter as it danced.

You beckon all your calling charms
that mark a tempestuous trail--
no snapping twig or sound alarms.

Powerless to this grand assail
breathless and scorched, in need of air--
which sanity would not avail.

To muster strength I shall not bear
while encircled in utter bliss--
A kiss as this is all too rare.

Deluge of rapids went amiss
while encircled in utter bliss--
Clandestine afternoon was spent
by love’s awakening ascent.



© 2008 Sandi Alford


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Sandi Alford
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I think.
in all the mountain trails I've hiked
I have yet to see such beautiful cascades!

wonderful rhythm and rhyme

Ven

Posted 16 Years Ago


mother nature works her wonder
from drive in shows to river's thunder
and sweet the bliss of nearing kiss
as hope's assurance alights on this
that in a place where rocks abound
heart's fresh flowering can be found
so thanks for sharing this sweet rhyme
in waltzing meter tapping time
and even if my comments blunder
we'll all remember river's thunder

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful romance presented with wonderful rhythm and rhyme. Excellent. ~Pamela

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well structured poem with very descriptive verse....'Powerless to this grand assail'.....excellent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


You definitely portrayed colorful, powerful words of great intelligence, milady.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is so beautiful
and romantic. Nice to
know I can even recgonize
romance any more LOL
I truly enjoyed this
Hugs
D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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