My perfect world

My perfect world:

When I think of my idealworld I see,

Children laughing,

giggling,

smiling.

 

Birds flying free,

Whistling,

Singing.

 

Elderly people walking,

Smiling,

Reminiscing.

 

People loving,

Caring,

Sharing.

 

I see a world of peace,

Harmony,

And meaning.

 

One with happiness,

Joy,

Fun.

 

No bad,

No worries,

Nothing to care about other than the present.

 

That would make my perfect world.

Author's Note

So. What do you think?
It was a quick piece and i just thought I'd share it.
Please give me advice on how i could maybe work on it, give me yuor opinion on it.

Thanks!
:)

Reviews

[EJB]

great job. The meaning behind this is really nice and calming. Good job