Letter For My Love

My voice trembles as I try to speak

I attempt to joke my situation

Knowing what comes next

And I know doesn't seem like it

I want it, badly

I want the marks

Showing that I'm yours

The soreness   

Proving that it was real

Because afterwards what is there?

I want the little things

The way you hand glides across my back

When you walk by

Your eyes when they look at me

Knowing they aren't just looking at me

But my posture, my lips and the way they curl 

Into that not so innocent smile

I want to feel the need in your kiss

The crave in your grasping arms

The roughness in your love

Going so hard to see

What my pleasure sounds like

What my pleasure taste like

And in return I give my all

Ask and you shall receive 

Any and all requests 

For you, none are impossible

Love, your Babygirl 

P.s. In case you didn’t know I love you

Reviews

[Chris]

If real I doubt your "intended" spent much time catching the "flaws" while being lost-in-between your lines. If fiction - there are a few flaws ...read it slowly and aloud and you should catch them.

[Sammie Sanchez]

I meant this poem to be like a fluttering heart. Like an overactive mind that jumps too fast to finish a thought. So the flaws that are there, are there for that purpose. Thank you for commenting though.

[Chris]

Cool...and it WAS like a fluttering heart.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Very romantic and desirable. Everything inside of you is yearning to be touched.this is written effectively.well done