J.-.

Where are you?

I wanted to talk to to you today 

You closed your account 

...

I shed a tear in the middle of class

I must look crazy, I thought 

But I didn't care

Why did you leave?

What about what we had?

Nothing?

No reply

 

Is this life biting me in the a*s?

After all the times I've left someone special 

Now you left me

What about our special collaboration?

The story about a love in one special night.

A night special to me and you.

Please come back

Please

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Very impressive writing, the voice of the one who has lost something special is made clear here. Very well written.

[CMC]

Powerful expression of the feelings of abandonment and longing. Thank you for sharing.

[Shasha]

It's really impressive, how you write! This writing expresses your feelings really nicely! Keep writing!