Parental Advice

Parental Advice

A Poem by Sammie Sanchez

Find my place in the world
Right?
Isn't that what is drilled into our heads as children and young adults

Be yourself
How can you be yourself, if being yourself means standing out in a crowd
When all you wanna do is fit in

Just smile
Welp sorry i only smile with chocolate, chocolate is true happiness.
That and some other stuff that will not be named.

Stay a kid.
But how is this even possible when forced to deal with harsh reality every day.

Why is advice so wrong?
And yet so right in so many ways.

© 2017 Sammie Sanchez


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Very true! Be a child, live the way you want! That's easy to say but once you start being, the world jumps on you. They never encourage you for being someone different.
Other thing, Sorry for criticizing but Can you please make that 'i' capital? That's kinda bothering me. Otherwise, well penned! Keep writing!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You are right advices seem to be wrong for us but right for the others. Advising someone is easy but following is difficult. This world never understands and just want us to be like it. If we try to be different or even ourself it just pounces on us like an animal preying on its food. It tries to damage us in every possible way. All they want is us to listen to them not telling them what we want or what we think.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It is one of life's greatest paradoxes. The advice is bot suitable and unsuitabe, and may change at any time.
wonderful read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Almost everything has more than one meaning, that's the beauty of humanity. Great poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very true! Be a child, live the way you want! That's easy to say but once you start being, the world jumps on you. They never encourage you for being someone different.
Other thing, Sorry for criticizing but Can you please make that 'i' capital? That's kinda bothering me. Otherwise, well penned! Keep writing!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sammie Sanchez
Sammie Sanchez

Waskom, TX



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18 now. - as of the end of 2018 lol- Just message me. I haven't written anything in 2 years now but I wanna start writing again Add me on snapchat or instagram @samz2767 Any other questions/review.. more..

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