non sense

blue is the sky

my life is the sky

clouds are my eyes

vast

grass can die

green to yellow then nothing

the ground bare

empty

house parties are loud 

colors and music

the bass through my body

sway

close the clouds

the bare ground can die

just sway 

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Very complicated lines and well could not understand but enjoyed the reading. Thanks for sharing.

[rowan.taylorrr]

I am obsessed with this piece

[Taz]

Well done! I enjoyed the repetition. It is a peice worth reading. I didn't quite understand the message but love the mystery.

[Sammie Sanchez]

Truly there is no message. Like daily life, some days past by with no great signifigence with no lesson to be learned, like this poem

[Taz]

But isn't that the message?

[Sammie Sanchez]

basically, yes

[apennylate]

Just sway and let grass die as the skies bleed blues and greens... Simple things displayed in neat rhyme-scape... Wonderfully penned...

[Mel Jayne]

This piece is very whimsical and poetic. I like the way that the theme flows throughout.

[Cœur]

Very nice piece, especially the grass part. I enjoyed it.

[Sammie Sanchez]

thanks, i got bored and thought of random things