Daddy's ham
A Poem by Samuel Jack
Fun with my son
That's Daddy's ham!
But here it comes that little hand
A cheeky little primate
Is stealing from my plate
Whatever's on there
He's got to have a taste
He smiles so sweet
Gives me a little "pweese"
And there it goes
My old heart squeezes
Green eyes of Ireland
He's too good lookin
this squidgy little human
Will only eat Daddys cookin
© 2013 Samuel Jack
Author's Note
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I know it's simple, but I find that the Poems I write about my son tend to come out like this, I think it makes it more charming. Any comments welcome
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Reviews
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Sweet, sweet! I think he is adorable. Angi~
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks, He thinks so to :)
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11 Years Ago
its a tale for the ages definatly haha thanks for the review.
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11 Years Ago
It's an adventure all right, full of highs and lows :) and fear.......lots of fear........BUT also h.. read moreIt's an adventure all right, full of highs and lows :) and fear.......lots of fear........BUT also happiness.
Thanks for the review and WOW! We have the same first name, you must be an EXCELLANT poet, so I'll drop you some reviews soon name brother
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11 Years Ago
That's a good name--"Samuel". I'm not much of a poet, though, and write mostly prose.
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11 Years Ago
I was reading about your grandfather the original Samuel, but Jacob is biting my leg. I will drop yo.. read moreI was reading about your grandfather the original Samuel, but Jacob is biting my leg. I will drop you some reviews later. I will say though the story of Samuel getting up and going to Waldron is an excellant read, I'm big into my Americana, and this little slice has been delicious so far, full review incoming
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11 Years Ago
I look forward to it.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks, I really enjoyed this one, it was more fun than trying to write some epic observation on hum.. read moreThanks, I really enjoyed this one, it was more fun than trying to write some epic observation on humanity. Inspired by real events!! Thanks for the review, I'll check out some of your stuff, and so the great review cycle carries rollin on!!
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11 Years Ago
I was trying to right an epic observational piece, then Jacob grabbed my breakfast! So a poem was bo.. read moreI was trying to right an epic observational piece, then Jacob grabbed my breakfast! So a poem was born. Thank you for the lovely review
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11 Years Ago
many more will be born in the days ahead.. in fact as he grows so will you.. :o)
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11 Years Ago
That's what I was going for Rita, thanks.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, inspired by real events! Great review
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11 Years Ago
"I really liked your Daddy's Ham -
I really liked it Sam I am.." lol
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, its nice to get feedback, I use to think all poems had to be some great epic observation .. read moreThank you, its nice to get feedback, I use to think all poems had to be some great epic observation on humanity, but this websites taught me different. Nice review
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11 Years Ago
Aahhhhh cheers pars
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Added on June 11, 2013
Last Updated on June 11, 2013
Author
Samuel JackBirmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom
About
I'm from the industrial wasteland that is England, I'm very passionate about poetry, while not being very educated on the subject. So constructive criticism is more than welcome.
I like poetry, for.. more..
Writing
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