Curious

Most people should relate

Curious his thoughts

How they sometimes have wings

But always have claws

Author's Note

I honestly believe that you don't need to build a massive structure around an idea. Just to let people know, this poem was written about my thoughts, not about curiosity.

Reviews

[MidnightBlood]

I like the way how you describe curious. Your poem has used very good descriptive sentences like how they sometimes have wings but always have claws. It's true that we are always curious about some things and want to know what it is. We want to know what it is and sometimes trouble happens when we're too curious.

[Samuel Jack]

Interesting view point mish mash, the poem is about my thoughts more than the feeling of being curious. But I like that you saw something else. Thank you

[Paula]

I like this view point, mish mash

[MidnightBlood]

Thank you

[writer in trial]

is this something related to your dreams?? Coz i still remember, many years back an old man came in my dreams. He has long and dirty hairs and a long face too. He looked ugly and he had those claws. it was a weird dream. :D

But whatever you wrote, is this your nightmare creature?? I am curious

[Samuel Jack]

No its more that a lot of the time my thoughts are far from uplifiting. interesting dream you had there though. thanks for the review :)

[DCT ponderings]

Curiosity killed the cat they say
so it was the mice came out to play. ;)

[Samuel Jack]

The poems less about curiosity and more about my thoughts, maybe I should change the name. Thanks for the review though

[DCT ponderings]

Don't change the name. You clearly say that it is you thoughts that are curious. Emphasis on thoughts. :)

[DCT ponderings]

It's not the titles fault I didn't read. :))

[Magnolia Liberato]

You definitely have a spark that I can't find in many of the poets that I review. This poem, though short, successfully gives me an insight into your thoughts. It's interesting the way that you describe thoughts as always having claws. I never thought about it that way before, but it makes sense.

[Samuel Jack]

Wow (blushes) thank you very much, I do tend to beat myself up worse than anyone else ,even my sparring partner, who nearly gouged out my eye, as you can see on my proudly displayed pic lol

[Paula]

It does seem we are always clutching at something. There have been many essays and novels built around that which your (senyru?) puts in a full fat nutshell. I think it's well written.

[Samuel Jack]

Thank you, I have no formal poetry education so I'm not sure if this is a senyru or not. Thanks for commenting.