Dreams

An old love poem of mine.

Dreams for me have never seemed real.

And if it wasn't for you they wouldn't be still.

But now they come through crystal and clear.

And waking up is my biggest fear.

So I pray to god to control my fate.

Pray that my reality can wait.

Theres only one reasone for the words above.

When it comes to you I think I'm in love.

Author's Note

This is a bit rough, so help me fix it up. Don't pull your punches give it to me straight.

Reviews

[PhoeniX]

this was adorable. truly sweet. good write.

[Danielle Asher]

I am not a big fan of love poems (at least not right now) but this was short and sweet and to the point. The last three lines are a little sticky. Meaning, they are okay if you left it as is, but they just get stuck a little unlike the flow of the beginning of the piece. keep with it. and thanks for putting it out there. Sometimes i think love poems are the hardest to write.