Backstage love

compassion in the guise

Partial strokes to capture your smile
inept lure of my full intentions
reality frightens us all the same
when the name of love is spoken

Beyond dismay and discontent
behind the still voice of incompetence
rests the truths of compassion
which nulls the heart and mind
unless fulfilled, the void of kindness

I am guilty all the same
of actions, to capture , to escape
when everyone comes to know
until I cannot show
love is an unspoken language.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful poem about love indeed.
Love the complex way you describe love here.
This was in depth, moving, romantic, meaningful and deep.
I enjoyed the read
keep writing always :)

[Samuel Dave]

Hey Thanks for your view. I will try always :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Tales Of A Dreamer]

Your words entice me, dearly, this girl of yours is truly special I've sensed.
When you finally publish your works I favor of you to autograph my copy.
Cheers~