Maybe

Maybe

maybe the sky will turn pink
maybe the rain will pour red
maybe the page will bear ink
for honor of the lies bled

maybe all will be so if I wished it
a blank canvas and wild imagination
whatever obstruction paper thin
a world without limitations

maybe, all possibilities
yet all my thoughts feed the flame
that burn my dreams to ashes
a control of the mind; a will tamed
to save me from madness

shattered pieces that come to define
the very personality it should defy
a quantum world, parallel lines
virtual realities, choices vary

responsibilities; so irresponsibly
but maybe, she'll see me for who I am
helplessly bleeding in the sun

only, maybe.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

Oh Samuel, this was beautiful...different, unlike anything i have really read before...which is really nice. ' a control of the mind, a will tamed, to save me from madness' well done friend, well done!

[Samuel Dave]

Thanks.... this made me happy :)

[Willard Wells]

A very conflicted mind writing this work. Questioning everything around.

[Tales Of A Dreamer]

Maybe, wow.
This poem leads me to the feelings of uncertainty and it's mended with depth.
Job well done.

[Samuel Dave]

Thanks ^-^

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Magnificent!! I am almost at a loss for words. Absolutely no critique necessary here.

[Samuel Dave]

Thank you. I am glad it's only an almost. :)

[Kayla-Vi Hopkins]

love it :) I can see your writing style is very detailed and unique and it's interesting to read. Bravo!

[Samuel Dave]

:) Thanks for the encouragement and the careful observation....

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful poem. I would devide it in stanzas, it improves the reading. I like the feelings you have put in these sentences. You certainly have talent. Well done. :)
Rudi

[Samuel Dave]

Thank you very much, I am not quite good with rhythm so I like to leave it to the reader. Thanks for the advice. I'll work on it. :)

[_Oblivion_]

Amazing! I really enjoyed your poem, I felt a connection with the words that are indescribable. :)

[Samuel Dave]

Thank you... it comes from my frustration and I'm very glad it speaks to you. :)

[_Oblivion_]

I wish my frustration would come out in such beautiful words. :)